Saturday, 8 March 2014

Weekends!!

I love Monday to Friday...
But the weekends look like a cry day!!
Sometimes an injury while sometimes the heart…
I get that feeling that someone just killed me via a dart!
Previously weekends used to go so well…
But now they just feel like hell!
In my house I m jailed,
Here there are no chances of me getting bailed!
Not forgetting the excess studies,
Well these weekends make me miss my buddies!!!
The homework becomes mandatory…
Throughout the weekend it becomes a big reason to worry!
So you have to sit in front of the computer,
In the end get tired and curse your ruthless tutor!

                                                                -Viraj Ghelani

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14 comments:

  1. Unknown8 March 2014 at 17:37

    A quite good one considering tht its ur first one... :-)

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  2. Unknown8 March 2014 at 17:40

    thanks alot riddhi! keep browsin ull certainly c better ones..:)
    my promise..:) :)

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  3. Unknown8 March 2014 at 17:57

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  4. hArRy JaTAkiA.8 March 2014 at 18:01

    Awesome one bro....

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  5. Unknown8 March 2014 at 18:01

    thnk u!

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  6. Unknown8 March 2014 at 18:20

    thnk u..!

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  7. pearl8 March 2014 at 19:29

    Nice :)

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  8. Unknown8 March 2014 at 19:56

    thnk u pea..:)

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  9. jayval8 March 2014 at 20:11

    very good and wonderful rhyming.
    its good!

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  10. Anonymous8 March 2014 at 21:06

    good start ! cheers :D love u:* proud of u<3B-)

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  11. Pea :)8 March 2014 at 22:28

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  12. Pea :)8 March 2014 at 22:45

    Veeru this is really weird, but I just read ur poem! 0.0 that wasnt me....aaaaa evil twin! Lol jk... Actually good twin! She's right, this is very well written ;)

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  13. Unknown9 March 2014 at 11:14

    heheh....thank u sis...;) love yaa too...
    n pea..LOL..:P
    n yea..thanks alot!!

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  14. Unknown14 March 2014 at 20:53

    hehe .....nyc poetry......luv it ...

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