Monday 10 March 2014

Lone Warrior!

From the mountains to the rock,
Resisting all the possible shocks!
Down the hill it goes running...
Sometimes falling while sometimes hopping!
Due to the falls he gets hurt...
At the end of the fall he's full of dirt!
Built with ample of ego and anger…
That’s why he fights with his elders!
Thus loses his original shape,
And so is considered as a useless scrape!
Slowly and steadily gets used to these wounds...
That’s how it gets pointy..
And boy…his attitude rules!
This seems like a story of a warrior battling alone...
But no boss...
That’s the life of a stone!
                                                      -Viraj Ghelani

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17 comments:

  1. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 16:41

    Good One.

    Keep up the good work.

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  2. Smit Jatakia10 March 2014 at 16:46

    Nice one....

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  3. Unknown10 March 2014 at 16:50

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    1. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 17:23

      Awesome ....very touching

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    2. Unknown10 March 2014 at 17:33

      Thanks Buddy :-)

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    3. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 21:40

      Why your rhymes have been removed?

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    4. Unknown11 March 2014 at 09:24

      Its just that, Viraj doesn't appreciate talent. He feels that its vulgur.

      Anyways, Thanks once again for liking my rhyme.

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  4. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 17:13

    Truly a masterpiece veeru!

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  5. Rocker On Roar10 March 2014 at 17:50

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  6. Unknown10 March 2014 at 18:07

    thank you! :)

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  7. Unknown10 March 2014 at 18:27

    @bhavik mehta please dont post such comments!

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  8. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 21:28

    When is the next one coming

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  9. Unknown10 March 2014 at 22:03

    by tmrw..;) :) :D

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  10. Unknown14 March 2014 at 20:59

    hah u hv 2 help me write better poems....

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