Hey buddy what’s wrong with you,
Why you not sharing it with me when that thing is killing
you?
Why have you tangled up yourself like a wire?
Why aren't you disclosing the fact…
When its burning inside you like a fire!!???
Where is the trust that built us??
Did it just come down to a twig from a tree’s trunk??
What makes you so insecure…
When you already know that all the wounds can be easily
cured!
Be it a tsunami or be it a storm…
You very well know that I’ll be there all time long!
So please just open up and tell me the thing,
Because even you know that I can’t fight with you…
You’re my everything!
So until you don’t tell me ill keep thinking about it…
My world will just revolve around it!!
-Viraj
Ghelani
Really nice :)
ReplyDeletethank you!!
DeleteDear friend.... Awesome one... :)
ReplyDeletethanks smit!
Deletehow can I stop appreciating your stuff ???
ReplyDeletey do you want to stop?
DeleteHey... New idea for tomorrow.... Write a poem on anonymous! The copy-paste criticizer
ReplyDeletehahahaha!! true that! bt its ok neil P ! all i do is IGNORE!!
DeleteDearest dost...its awsome seeing you and your poems reaching a well....and this is the best poem out of the lot...i hope my long lost frnd also reads this poem
ReplyDeletethank you!
DeleteNice piece its really nice and reading yours my lost frnd is back..thnkyou
DeleteWow! Thats great!
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ReplyDeleteNeva stop writing it ...anyone reads it or not I will always read,it
ReplyDeleteI won't!
DeleteViraj, I didn't knew you write so well. I'm impressed looking at your work. Keep it up! :) Have some work for you. Stay in touch!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot jatan! Yes Wil be ready for d work! Do u mind giving me ur number on facebook?
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