Sunday 9 March 2014

Memories...

One fine day when there were no stars,
I just took a glance at my deep black scars...
Remembered that love time…
Which now seems like a crime!
I didn't know what to do,
Just sat and cried in the loo…
All I suffered was pain and frustration…
This had put me under maximal depression!
Always fought for my rights and showed my aggression...
 But is this what you get from such a long relation?
Finally decided to bring an end to these stories…
So opened my closet burnt all those memories!!!

                                                            -Viraj Ghelani
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22 comments:

  1. Smit Jatakia9 March 2014 at 12:19

    Ur poems are really fascinating...missing those good old memories we share....keep updating more... :)

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  2. Unknown9 March 2014 at 12:38

    thank you bro!!
    yes ill keep updating..u keep reading..:) :)

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  3. Krish Desai9 March 2014 at 13:12

    Waah xD

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  4. Unknown9 March 2014 at 13:16

    thnk u..:)

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  5. Anonymous9 March 2014 at 14:47

    Nice one..do publish more .your poems seem somehow related towards my life!I really love reading your poems..pls do not stop writing

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  6. Anonymous9 March 2014 at 17:05

    when is your next poem coming up...every second i wait for it!
    intezaar kab tak hum karen .... meherbaaniyan jald hi dusra publish karien

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  7. Unknown9 March 2014 at 19:14

    okayee..:) wont stop!!! n thank you very mch!!

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  8. Anonymous9 March 2014 at 20:28

    And yeah I hope u neva find out whose the anonymous.....and wen is the next poem coming up...pls tell it to me

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  9. Anonymous9 March 2014 at 20:34

    Am really waiting the poets paradise seems as though its an eternity plattform

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  10. Anonymous9 March 2014 at 20:35

    Poet ji mujhe aapse aur aapki shayariyon we pyaar ho gaya hain....ab aur intezar nahi kar sakti..... :P

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  11. Anonymous9 March 2014 at 21:08

    I am going to be a star,

    I am going to out shine you by far.

    Around this galaxy, I will swing ,

    From a little nobody, to the hottest thing.

    I am going to be a star.

    First , a little faint and dim,

    As I gain power,

    I will be shining to the rim.

    I will come in like an explosive boom.

    You will see me shine very soon,

    I am going to be a star.

    An explosive volume, yet unheard,

    I will out shine all the stars, even those yet unheard.

    I am going to be a star.

    The hottest thing at night,

    Truly , a beautiful sight.

    I will be the hottest in the galaxy ,too.

    Just wait and see in a million years or two.
    ........
    dear poet...i really knw who you are and person u have been,ur favourites and ur m&m's...its not the gal who loves m&m's ur thinking...even this gal loves writing poem and as a dedication to this poet thats u ..keep the spirit high,
    as there r many anonymous this sign will show u that its me-my lucky no10

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  12. Unknown9 March 2014 at 22:35

    thnk u ashmi!! :) hope d guess is right..;) :)

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  13. Unknown9 March 2014 at 22:36

    and a supeb poem!! :D ;)

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  14. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 06:37

    I knew it i wrote that its not the gal ur thinking ...only ashmi does not love m&m's....well u would never knw who it is...and just keep smiling...(10);)

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  15. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 07:00

    Living in the present and letting go of the past
    will make me happier and full of love at last.

    Sharing a smile and offering help will brighten
    my light as God speaks to me and makes my life
    worthwhile.

    Knowing just what he wants me to do by
    helping another will prove my love for you.

    God is the great "I Am" just as he shares
    his title with us; we must live for the moment
    and forget about the past.
    gud morning aur haan date change ho gayi hai !

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  16. Anonymous10 March 2014 at 08:41

    this one is me ashmi-veeru nice poem! and do not dare get confused with (10) and me;)
    and sorry!

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  17. Smit Jatakia10 March 2014 at 11:20

    Childhood friends? I hope we still are.
    Years have put space between us and now you seem so far.
    Childhood promises never seem to stick.
    Best friends forever is an old classic.
    What would happen in the future?
    We were not aware.
    Who could forget that one special person that was always there?
    The arms into which you fall.
    The one to which you crawl.
    No more playing in the back yard.
    Growing up sure makes being friends hard.
    From kids to teenagers we have grown so much.
    I wonder how such good friends seem to loose touch.
    Maybe destiny will hopeful let us meet again.
    Until then this is a letter to an old friend. :)

    I know I'm not that a good poem writer as u..but tried my best....and this is what I made....need. To take lessons from u..

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  18. Unknown10 March 2014 at 15:34

    guys!! its a request!!
    im not a teacher or some judge! so please dnt post poems in the comment area!!

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  19. Unknown14 March 2014 at 20:56

    I envy you.....sry can't be jealous ;p

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