Saturday 15 March 2014

Heaven on Earth!

The beautiful feeling when the hand brushes your hair!
Making you feel comfortable
Making you calm!
The warmness of her thighs…
Vanishes all who what and why’s!!
The sweet little jingles that she plays…
It takes you back to those olden days!
Her eyes seemed like an ocean of love and affection…
In a blink of an eye she took all my tension…
Her concern was shown by her every single tap..
It took me to my dream world as I went for a long nap!
She showered all her blessings with her every single touch…
I felt enchanted ….
There was no such joviality on Earth!
Oh yes! A nap on my mother’s lap is always
Heaven,
Heaven…
And Heaven!!!!!!
                                                          -Viraj Ghelani






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  1. Unknown15 March 2014 at 13:41

    So sweetly written wid real emotions!! Lovely!!! And I totally Agreee...it's HEAVEN!! Very well written!!!

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  2. Unknown15 March 2014 at 13:44

    Thank you Dhvani!!

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  3. Anonymous15 March 2014 at 13:48

    i believe in LOVE at first SIGHT , becoz i love my MOM since i opened my eyes.... nicely written VIRAJ ....... continue to keep us waiting to read ur rhymes everyday .....!!ChEeRS...

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    1. Unknown15 March 2014 at 13:50

      thank you kalash!!yes will keep writing you keep reading!!

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  4. hiral mehta15 March 2014 at 13:50

    Heart touching!!

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  5. Anonymous15 March 2014 at 13:56

    UR Ryhmes are grabbing my attention more than any book ...!!! :-)

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  6. Smit Jatakia15 March 2014 at 14:00

    Your poem really helped me.... Thanx.... Bro... :*

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  7. Anonymous15 March 2014 at 14:21

    Kalash bandh ......maharaja bhog shuru....

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  8. Unknown15 March 2014 at 15:12

    oNly rEaction after ReaDin iT was a nVr-enDing GRIN....!

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  9. Unknown15 March 2014 at 19:15

    i loved the style with which you write, why don't you compile all your poems and publish it ...????

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    1. Unknown15 March 2014 at 21:57

      Bhumika im just a small poet! Cannot even call myself a proper poet! cant just publish anythig! its not so easy!!

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    2. Unknown17 March 2014 at 18:38

      Don't underestimate yourself !!!
      Keep your confidence high and just aim for the best......
      And there are people who self - publish.....

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  10. Anonymous16 March 2014 at 10:28

    Its so well written viraj and moreover the emotions are quite shown wid the flow and beauty of the poem...nice

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  11. Anonymous16 March 2014 at 10:33

    Ur always welcome

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  12. Anonymous16 March 2014 at 15:13

    its a copy

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