Wednesday 12 March 2014

Morning Breeze!

A beautiful scene in front of my eyes,
Just a few moments left for the sun to rise!
The sky had an orangish hue
And the mixture with the blue color..
Gosh… it was an incredible view!
Tiny little birds coming out of their comfort zone..
Stretched themselves and were ready for a little ride
This was the reason behind their body being perfectly toned!
Now it’s time!
The birds steady…
The clouds in discipline…
The alarm shouting at the top of its voice!!
First came the rays…
Followed by the ruler who was always praised!
Experienced a grand feeling when you look at those wavy trees…
Just stood at the balcony and enjoyed the refreshing morning breeze!!!!
                                                                         -Viraj Ghelani


                                                                    
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22 comments:

  1. Anonymous12 March 2014 at 07:23

    Nice....and keep up the hard work u really put on!

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  2. Smit Jatakia12 March 2014 at 07:27

    Keep it up bro...... :)

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  3. Unknown12 March 2014 at 09:22

    :D

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  4. Unknown12 March 2014 at 09:57

    Thnk u Ashmi, smit n Utkarsh!!! ;)

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  5. Unknown12 March 2014 at 10:02

    Viraj ur writing is reaching a different level now!! Awesome!!*!

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  6. Unknown12 March 2014 at 11:59

    Thanks a Lott dhvani...:)
    Keep surfing for more...;)
    As you know..still a long way to go ...!!!

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  7. Unknown12 March 2014 at 12:12

    Ofcorzzzzzz forever to go!!!😁😁

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  8. DEVET12 March 2014 at 13:23

    Best one yet

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    1. Unknown12 March 2014 at 13:27

      I was so waitin for your comment bro!!! ;)
      Thanks devet!

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    2. Anonymous12 March 2014 at 19:02

      Copy paste

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    3. Unknown12 March 2014 at 19:55

      Whoever this person is..this is my blog where i put my thoughts and poems!
      i haven't copy pasted anything from any other site! so please don't pass such comments!
      thank you

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    4. Unknown13 March 2014 at 21:22

      This is d only thing happens after alot of ppl lyk ur work... but dey dnt noe d efforts that have been put behind this little piece....!

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    5. Anonymous18 March 2014 at 16:47

      It was indeed a great effort....... Ctrl+C and then Ctrl+V.

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  9. Unknown13 March 2014 at 21:23

    D rHyme is JsT so daMn AwEsUm...!

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  10. Unknown13 March 2014 at 21:53

    thanks alot aashvi! and thank you for supporting! :) :D

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  11. Unknown14 March 2014 at 20:41

    do u think about the topic first or about the poem first ???

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    1. Unknown14 March 2014 at 20:55

      i just dont think!!
      i open microsoft word and my hands strt typin!

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    2. Unknown14 March 2014 at 21:03

      ok .....that's damn awesome...

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    3. Unknown14 March 2014 at 21:16

      thank you so much!

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  12. Anonymous15 March 2014 at 01:23

    copy paste is what i think

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    1. Anonymous18 March 2014 at 16:48

      I completely agree with you mate.

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